A Secret Love

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My lovely rose

of May,

keep your secret love

in

your heart

and let

the fragrance

of it

touch

the frozen soul

of

people

passing by

without

seeing

your hidden beauty.

Let them

remember

the

love

they once felt,

long time

ago.

Maybe, 

my lovely rose of May,

their heart

will bloom again,

just like

you

do.

2 Kommentare Gib deinen ab

  1. Chris White sagt:

    That is a lovely poem. Roses are my favourite flower.
    One thing … I would use the word ‘fragrance’ instead of ‘odour’. It sounds sweeter. All the best. Kris.

    1. Oh thank you very much for your input! That’s really great!!!! I will change it as soon as possible, it really sounds sweeter!!! Have a great day!!! Silvia

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