My lovely rose
of May,
keep your secret love
in
your heart
and let
the fragrance
of it
touch
the frozen soul
of
people
passing by
without
seeing
your hidden beauty.
Let them
remember
the
love
they once felt,
long time
ago.
Maybe,
my lovely rose of May,
their heart
will bloom again,
just like
you
do.
That is a lovely poem. Roses are my favourite flower.
One thing … I would use the word ‘fragrance’ instead of ‘odour’. It sounds sweeter. All the best. Kris.
Oh thank you very much for your input! That’s really great!!!! I will change it as soon as possible, it really sounds sweeter!!! Have a great day!!! Silvia